【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ j8 g. P# a/ j/ v7 _' |5 p) @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 j7 c4 z3 j$ `6 c6 U5 \6 hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) G* B9 }: D9 ^  z: C6 }: f; b, ^/ YI already loved you with all my heart
% g1 R  v8 n' i4 [- k( j5 fWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ I" |+ Z4 P+ h% ~, ~9 ~Why is it so difficult to express?
1 K# s4 H7 ?0 a6 @; jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ g1 g: t& ~+ \* wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& [& ^5 C5 |. g4 b) s/ ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 c  i4 x) A& L+ CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 f, E0 u& ~0 f" ZLove… just the word love
+ S- P- V0 ~0 V# _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. R+ r  \7 o0 [+ e  X7 r) DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) H  D% L: M5 r/ C9 d8 VEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

" Q( n) u; l% a# @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* i/ n: t: z  y9 Z# S% {- ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) D4 n! `6 D" D# d# a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ G& m4 F. l8 `6 c3 d+ H% r  M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 p# o( B1 O0 D( K7 v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# U/ \! |9 w# @) O+ o, r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 S; V0 y* P( q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 B  l/ g) f+ s! C& A8 @  h. p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 d" d$ [, H' \+ m2 |; ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; U0 x8 ^& h3 d# j! u2 o. f9 O% L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; Q& A: ^& R7 y" t9 z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" l+ t6 x' O* ~( f1 m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; x6 J8 C* q* \$ g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! {# U% A: k2 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 k1 R. A0 L. W/ ~+ z! I* i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  \& w0 l% p- i2 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: y9 X  h2 ~" _<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  M) ^5 c2 C$ A9 O0 t. v$ e" j<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 h! f6 s" g  W2 q2 u<P>But I never did </P>
" A5 K, @- z, q6 x2 r<P>但我不会 </P>
# W: l+ D( n2 _, E! i2 a4 }* U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 N* Y0 k- q* K0 f' U' w; g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! @9 c8 ?* t( @8 t% e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) F7 g$ B  b" z" ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; D8 Q9 L0 q, E; _4 K* b, Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 {% w. o# H) `! a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; n9 x) S/ c1 v# D  m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" ?7 t; c$ z# W" V$ h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* b$ M  H( e) O; R) W# }( w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 p* }- j( l8 Z- A<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( [/ h7 G6 \9 \1 c7 a: ]<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% c1 r: z1 W8 ~. f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 O  N0 A# g, I9 p0 D1 v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>