【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) S4 i! @3 V7 Q% D2 O- EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 K. m9 x5 b9 g/ _1 l# jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 U% U2 |& p9 |& @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 Y3 g7 U# k+ v0 D8 \! \6 {" oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: s0 \! l$ L- `& BThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 `9 ^2 W6 A; P- W3 F4 _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 |) k5 z) q; \0 O. ?, zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ J, X# v7 W1 L" L3 i% e! C9 L2 i. I) a- ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, I2 Y7 M: j& D; D( hI love you I love you with all my heart
  n: x2 A( V" X2 A* r9 _6 INothing can compare to my love
2 b. a; O# [) P" o0 s- i# ~. mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 O/ F) M- ~) p% j/ h& qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& M/ O) m, B) |$ C! rI’m still filled with fear
3 x2 b, Y3 f+ R: K. d3 z9 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: H/ ?& q; j2 B4 m; aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ ?' m. \2 Y0 N  L# d6 {# tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 n; Z( y& o5 Z0 [! OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* R5 }8 j, g  n- |1 L+ @) i6 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ W, h$ }1 @0 k8 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 u  q1 P; o9 _$ U, c$ j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; \( i0 c# P( c9 J! R/ Y6 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 n( B6 M% }! r9 b4 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; D2 t0 v& I& g# L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& h( g( k+ [0 k: h4 n7 }* C& n2 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, o* w& a) A7 R6 h0 c9 \5 d1 `. d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  S6 B+ M5 v6 Q1 {9 H' M$ Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( S5 Z) K+ |) j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 I1 z8 D) d; Y  b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ m7 [* `2 w" `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# Q2 c; y  ~1 A" l7 U  c9 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 b8 M4 A; b% D) {6 Q% K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; H3 S* O1 L# ]9 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% W& u; q9 z3 g6 ~1 s4 [; _. f! v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, k2 B; j* ]% V$ \( k# X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 Z8 p: R" ]& q) a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 ?0 @. R5 \1 C0 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 k) x7 s* B: F( g* p. c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 @. a& G1 t( `& S$ \3 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
; |3 r0 l5 a# t( }# a4 z$ x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 J; D5 q* |; u+ I2 E7 f( m. B$ d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, \6 L1 z: |6 P7 z4 [5 a' E& D# g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 J5 K9 o( d; N5 M; S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 \- ~, E4 \" [8 [' T, {; k! v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; \' G1 t+ _1 h* J8 S' x! R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# Y  y9 h/ {: \9 R1 w, R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, C8 B' E, P( q5 I0 X( v8 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ T1 J3 Q' k- k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>